heroics
no i don’t want the job
two decades & all those close
calls
you’re kidding
detained by the queenly nymph
Kalypso
as Lattimore translates sound cozy
think it over
here’s the half hollow sound
of a windblown cold drinks can
rolling along the street
how long’s it been
Concise, punchy...and I agree. My kind of thing, although I don’t/can’t write like you, As a reader, a fan.
ReplyDeleteHave a pleasant day. Hope you have some air in Barcelona. Here, in Toulouse, it’s sweltering hot 🥵. ....again after two blissful days of respite (cloudy, 24 and 28 degrees.) As the French say...< Marches a l’Ombre >
Thank you, Susan. A somewhat belated thanks as your comment was just seen today. As to weather, it rained last night & early this morning but at 9 a.m. the temp is already rising... Hoping to see more ofyour writing soon!
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